Some people think universities should admit only the young students who score high marks.
Other people say that both young and adults should be admitted even if they did not pass their exam.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Education is believe to be part of basic social human rights for all citizens in a country, be it old or young.There are split opinion regarding admitting only young people with good grades into universities to study.Some believe that all ages should be allowed either they meet up with the required scores or not.However, both has its own pros and cons.Therefore, before commenting on my decision, both the opinion would be addressed.
Examining the former opinion, the primary argument the supporters would put forward is that for the young students,their level of assimilation is very high.This is because they have less things to disturb their mind, thus,when they gain admission they always perform excellently.Moreso,It is believe that they face less stress and do not fall sick often this help them to attend lecture always.For instance,a 40 years old students with age related illness will certainly miss class to keep up with his clinic appointment.
On the contrary, the latter view suggest that all age group should be given admission to study in the university irrespective of their scores because this will helps to reduce the rate of illiteracy in the society.In addition,they also believe that having equal right to education will prevent stigmatization and social isolation, besides,all ages can come together to discuss easily without any hindrance of understanding one another.Such as having wide knowledge on the topic discuss in the environment like prevention of environmental pollution.
To conclude and give my opinion,i would say that is much better to admitting fresher with high marks into universities first to study their course of choice, this would encourage other not to relent in their academic performance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, regarding, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38181818182 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08396224693 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 68.0 20.2975951904 335% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 125.445207162 49.4020404114 254% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 370.0 106.682146367 347% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 68.75 20.7667163134 331% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 28.5 7.06120827912 404% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273097852103 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152577923741 0.084324248473 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733610459971 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152577923741 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733610459971 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 38.3 13.0946893788 292% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -6.0 50.2224549098 -12% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.0 11.3001002004 274% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.11 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.37 8.58950901804 132% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 29.2 10.1190380762 289% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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