The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in the world and in different continents.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart below gives information about the percentage of the population living in urban areas in the world and in different continents.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">The given bar chart shows the statistical data about the percentage of the world population living in six urban areas in three different years, 1950, 2007 and 2030. In general, the highest percentage of the population was in North America and the lowest percentage of the population was in Africa in three different years. It can be seen that, a higher percentage of people lived in North America which was 64% of the world population, and it increased in 2007, calculated 79%. It is expected to rise to 87% by 2030. Nearly, the same percentage of people lived in Latin America in 2007, where, in 1950 their population was half of the total world population, 42% counted. According to the chart, in Africa, the population was much lower than the other parts of the world. In 1950, the lowest percentage of the world population lived in African cities which were calculated only 15%, then, it increased more than higher to 37% in 2007, and, it is expected to rise to 57% by 2030. Nearly, as many people lived in Asian cities as African in 1950. In 2030, the world population in urban areas projected to increase in six parts of the world.</span><br>

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 989.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84803921569 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04242003753 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.460784313725 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 289.8 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9525813348 43.030603864 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.888888889 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.22222222222 5.23603664747 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229303733943 0.215688989381 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103191634957 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617022631867 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229303733943 0.15604864568 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 61.2550243902 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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