Employers should give longer holidays to employees to encourage them to do their job well. Do you agree?
Holidays are enjoyed by all. It been long debated whether companies should reward their workers with extended holidays. I completely agree with this ideology of rewarding workforce with longer payed holiday to reduce their stress and an increase their motivation for enhanced overall productivity.
Now-a-days, managers are quite demanding in terms of employee’s productivity which often leads to development of stress, thereby elevating levels of stress hormone, Cortisol. It has been observed that a stressed human being is not able to perform his duties efficiently which eventually incur more time in task completion. So companies must award their workforce with longer leaves to relax their nerves. An apt example will be of SAP’s CEO, who had a tight schedule, wherein he used to plunge in 18 hours towards work followed by 2 hours of fitness and only four hours of sleep. His stringent routine for extended duration raised cortisol level in his body, which ultimately resulted his untimely death.
Additionally, there are many jobs which are physically demanding such as military services, firefighting, miners, and lots more. They too need longer holiday to de-stress their body. Government provide them with 2 months of paid holidays in a calendar year to reduce work pressure and stress. Thus, vitalizing their body and motivating their mind.
Extended holidays not only assist in reduction of stress levels, but it also helps in motivating an individual to provide his undivided best. A motivated workforce is more productive and come up with agile ways of working. Needless to mention, they elevate overall enthusiasm among peers and make them passionate toward their work. As per a recent survey, people prefer to work with companies that provide flexible working hours and opportunity for longer holidays.
To summarize, employers must not pressurize their employer as it results in reduced productivity. However, they must reward them with longer paid holidays, thereby improving their overall productivity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1738.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51746031746 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80343524647 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615873015873 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.6937486389 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5555555556 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.05555555556 7.06120827912 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174369736632 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635809095504 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483721190993 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11621046504 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506460760444 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.44 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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