You are looking for a full-time job. Write a letter to an employment agency. In your letter:
introduce yourself
explain what sort of job you would like
say what experience and skills you have
Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir/Madam
You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to submit my professional profile in your job agency for employment opportunities relevant to my experience. I am an engineering graduate with 7 years of Software Engineering experience, and I am currently employed with Infosys Limited, India
I will be relocating to Canada next month and as my current employer is not able to transfer me to Canada office so I have decided to change job. I am looking for a full-time employment in IT sector in Canada, and my preferred job location would be Toronto, Greater Toronto or Brampton area.
Most of my past work experience included data engineering tasks, wherein I worked in teams responsible for enterprise level database designing and maintenance. In early years of my career, my job duties included software coding and testing, however, I am currently working as a Solution Architect and lead a team of 10 junior software developers. I have a techno-functional role now; along with technical, I have also gained some of the functional skills such as Project Management & Delivery. For more details, I have enclosed my detailed profile in the attachment.
Looking forward to hearing from your side!
Yours faithfully,
Harinder
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ployed with Infosys Limited, India I will be relocating to Canada next month...
^
Line 9, column 147, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...office so I have decided to change job. I am looking for a full-time employment i...
^
Line 13, column 426, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...long with technical, I have also gained some of the functional skills such as Project Manag...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, look, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1040.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30612244898 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18241321508 2.54303337028 125% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647959183673 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 327.6 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.2349379368 44.8134815571 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.0 76.5299724578 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 16.8248392259 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148869706863 0.216113520407 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0726020694436 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586564501084 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0897535265301 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028695661487 0.0580467560999 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 8.37731958763 189% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 70.7449484536 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 7.45979381443 185% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 8.71597938144 158% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.55 7.59969072165 139% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 41.2886597938 172% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.