Write a letter to a city planning manager about the demolition of a historical building in your area.
In your letter, you should:
· explain why it shouldn’t be demolished.
· suggest a future use for this building.
· recommend a way to raise money for repairs.
Dear Mr. Smith,
As you are the Planning Manager for West Delhi so I am writing this suggestion letter to you regarding an old building in the area where I live. This building is a historic church constructed in 1902, and the city's municipal committee is planning to demolish this old structure to clear land for an upcoming shopping complex. Being a century old, the church has a rich history and this was one of the famous churches of the British rule in India. Therefore this historical building must have preservation orders.
Alternatively, the building can be used as a museum. As the place has already available furniture from the past and with a minor effort on the renovation of some of the damaged infrastructure, the building can be put into use as a history museum. Being in the city center assures the popularity of the upcoming museum in visitors.
The funding surely can be a problem for this project as the government is cost-cutting on city development budgets. However, the city council can easily mortgage the property for construction-related cost and then set a ticket price for visitors once the museum is ready, and this ticket amount can be utilized to pay back the mortgage.
Looking forward to hearing from you!
Yours faithfully,
Harinder
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 448, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... churches of the British rule in India. Therefore this historical building must have pres...
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Line 9, column 158, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ith a minor effort on the renovation of some of the damaged infrastructure, the building ca...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, regarding, so, then, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 32.9175257732 39% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1085.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04651162791 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93739987229 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590697674419 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 331.2 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.6569501474 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.5 76.5299724578 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 16.8248392259 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291014242618 0.216113520407 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111528080887 0.0766984524023 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619123831593 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133528171955 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0816614677269 0.0580467560999 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 8.37731958763 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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