You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
give details of your study plans
explain why you want to get a part-time job
suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Dear Rick,
I hope you are doing good. As you know, I will be moving to Canada next month for higher studies , I am writing to ask for your help in finding a part-time work for myself.
I have enrolled for a 2 year Post Graduation Diploma course in the university of Ottowa, and this course offers bi-weekly classroom program. So I will be going to the university twice a week which gives me 4 free days every week. This free time can be utilized to earn some credit with the help of part time work.
Being a student, you are very well aware of the hefty fee that international students have to pay and I took a study-loan from the State bank of India. Earning while studying can be of great help in repaying the loan and earlier, I start the repayment lower will be the rate of interest.
Finally, I would need your help to get part-time job and it will be of great help if you can refer me to any store or workplace that offers part-time employment. I will catch up with you when I arrive in Canada, next week.
See you soon!
Regards,
Harinder
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 97, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... to Canada next month for higher studies , I am writing to ask for your help in fi...
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Line 9, column 305, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ed to earn some credit with the help of part time work. Being a student, you are ver...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, so, well, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 886.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45226130653 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38951354882 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.618090452261 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.726837581 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289325625997 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1229189303 0.0766984524023 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824987837101 0.0603063233224 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186034022951 0.12726935374 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109879832744 0.0580467560999 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.53 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.