The graphs show figures relating to hours worked and stress levels amongst professionals in eight groups.
Describe the information shown to a university/college lecturer.
The given bar chart compares the details of the weekly average working hours for different types of workers and the pie chart shows how stressful they are.
For the bar chart, it shows that businessmen work the longest hours per week which reach 70 hours. Followed by it is movie producers who work 60 hours a week. There are three types of professionals whose working hours over 40 but lower than 60, and they are doctors, writers and programmers, which weekly work 52, 45 and 40 hours. The rest three are all spend lower than 40 hours but higher than 20 hours per week. And people who work as lecturers cost only 25 hours a week which is the least one among eight professionals.
However, although lecturers work only 25 hours a week, they suffer from the highest percentages of stress related illness. A quarter of them feel stressful. Also, even though business men have the longest working hours per week, but only 11% of this professionals suffer from stress issues. It seems programmers is the dream job for people since it only need 40 hours working a week, but gained the least pressure which only 5% of them have stress issue.
- The graph below shows the alcohol-related deaths in 7 different countries and the average beer consumption in 2005.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the description of the correlation of the table that follows. 73
- In some countries, the difference in age between parents and children is generally greater than it was in the past. Do you think the dvantages outweigh disadvantages？ 11
- Some people believe that employers should not be concerned about the way their employees dress, but the quality of their work. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
- Some people think the most important thing about being rich is that it gives an opportunity to help other people. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 246, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...working hours per week, but only 11% of this professionals suffer from stress issues...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 13.0 33.7804878049 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 948.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69306930693 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34800158851 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534653465347 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0958234635 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 5.23603664747 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190634137176 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913649521595 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.036446022974 0.0843802449381 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137554767002 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0173730779867 0.0819641961636 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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