Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to be well-informed, a person must get information from many different news resources.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In this progresive and sophisticated world, thanks to globalization news play crucial role in modern life and should be noticed to improve the knowledg and consieusness. When it comes to this point, people have some debates as to whether people shouls get information from various news resourses or should follow just one of them. truly, I agree with the firts group and in what follows two reasons will be discussed to shed light on this idea.
The first reason coming to my mind to substantiate my stand point is that these days many news resourses have a strong connection with the politicians. Therefore, the relative news resources do not expose political corruptions. It would be more reliable if people follow the news from different resources to find independent news outlets. For instance, owr mayer had taken bribes from some groups to demolished the park that was near to my home and was enormousely beneficial for local children an elderly. Moreover, some relative news resources not only hidden this corruption but also tried to support the mayer. Consiquently, I always check a lot of news outlets.
Another equally noteworthy point corroborating my stance is that different news are strong in some especific areas like sports, political issues and health scopes. Therefore, it is better for people to check different news to get correct and compelet data. My personal experience is a compelling example of this. When I in the university as a student, I always check the university network. After a while I found that the university news did not cover political news because of the university low that did not allowed to cover the political issues. Therefore, I decided to catch political informations from another news resources.
To sum up, based on all argumentation stated above, I strongly believe that people should not trust to limited news outlets because some of them are exist to support politicians and government. besides, different news resoueces are disigned to cover some special issues. Therefore, if people want to have correct information about various issues in the world, They should check different news resources.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun news seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much news', 'a good deal of news'.
Suggestion: much news; a good deal of news
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...ormousely beneficial for local children an elderly. Moreover, some relative news resources...
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Message: Did you mean 'covering'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: covering
...the university low that did not allowed to cover the political issues. Therefore, I deci...
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Suggestion: Besides
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, as to, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1815.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 350.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18571428571 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82574317478 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531428571429 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9648506929 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.833333333 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4444444444 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227279227906 0.236089414692 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781124343182 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0457328159221 0.0737576698707 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140998592549 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0205497625857 0.0645574589148 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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