Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Many people argue that the disappear of special plants and endangered species caused by human activities, while others think that there are many vital environment problems that people need looking at. From my perspective, the atmosphere plays an important part in humans than other living things.
There are several serious issues facing to human population caused by the loss of trees and species. Firstly, plants produce large oxygen and absorb the carbon dioxin, which creates clean air for humans to use. In addition, forests play a necessary role to our inhabitants such as remaining the nutrition for the ground, as well as preventing floods and droughts.
In spite of these views, humans should pay more attention to other severe environmental problems. Plastic pollution is a great example, within over 1000 years to decompose, plastic trash harms a lot of sea creatures, which is one of the main food resources for humanity, if the quantity of those animals has gone down, humans could face the hunger crisis. Another important environmental problem need to be mention is that air pollution. Researches show that air pollution has a serious effect on people’s health. There were so many strong illnesses have been found, according to the pollution of the atmosphere. In my opinion, individuals need to learn and aware of how their actions impact the environment. Furthermore, governments should adopt some measures to combat those issues, as well as give funds to environmental organisations to improve citizens’ living standards.
In conclusion, while animals and plants are vital to the humans' population, I still believe that other environmental issues outweigh than the extinction of other forms of life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 24, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
Many people argue that the disappear of special plants and endangered specie...
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Line 13, column 58, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
...ile animals and plants are vital to the humans population, I still believe that other ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, so, still, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38461538462 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87930262547 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630036630037 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7408535496 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.076923077 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6153846154 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213517678394 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711102591156 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555306779648 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115831753479 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488588256966 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.