From the last few decades, the number of plants and animals are decreased.while so many species are endangered due to the detrimental actions of human beings. Although there are a few people who believe that there is nothing to be changed, unlikely them, I agree there are a lot of things that we can do to bring awareness among people to bring a change.
Humans are becoming more dangerous than any other animal in the world. Our activities are leading to the extinction of animals and plants. The population is increasing day by day and we are slaughtering animals to feed raising amount of mouths. In addition to that, the demand for luxurious products such as leather belts, shoes, leather jackets, clothes, and products that are made by animal skin or any other parts are climbed up. Moreover, people are cutting-off tress for the construction of houses on hilltops and mountains and also for extension of cities and towns. In fact, we are not so far from what some people think it is nothing to change if the killing of trees as well as the slaughtering of animals continues.
However, there is still to change the present situation and we can stop if people along with the government made some precautions to cease the bad activities of humans. for instance, The people who find pleasure in hunting animals should stop and banned. If anyone causes harm or kill animals should be penalized or if required sentence imprisonment. Governments from different countries should meet up and make plans to do their best to save the environment and it will not possible unless people held responsible and participate in activities to make changes.
In conclusion, there is still time to take the initiative for stopping the cruel acts of humans. The people from all over the world should have a commitment to save the planet and also god's creation.
- Some people claim that what people eat in many Western countries is unhealthy and that their diet is getting worse. Critics say that these countries should change their diet. What are your opinions on this? 78
- The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today is by reducing the need for people to travel from home for work, education or shopping.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 67
- Some people think that museums and art galleries should concentrate on the works of their own countries instead of the works of art from other parts of the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
- In most successful organisations, some people believe that communications between managers and workers are important, other people said that other factors are more important.Discuss both sides and give your opinion. 11
- Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world Some people think that this can not be changed while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change Discuss both views and give your opinion 81
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 170, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
... to cease the bad activities of humans. for instance, The people who find pleasure ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, so, still, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1538.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85173501577 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70180388826 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545741324921 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3258754336 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.857142857 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6428571429 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78571428571 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22960919243 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730212783666 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564272305104 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130374526569 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706681954286 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.