Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between two people.
Give reasons and details to support your answer.
there are certain considerations or factors that everyone takes into account in a
relationship. people may look for honesty, altruism, understanding, loyalty, being
thoughtful etc! everyone would more or less wish that the person s/he is dealing
with, has some of these virtues above. Putting them in an order according to their
importance, however can be very subjective and relative.
When someone asks him/herself the question "What do I consider to be the
most important thing in my relationship?" the answer depends on a lot of factors
such as how his/her earlier relationships were.
After stating that everyone's opinion can be different about this, for me honesty,
in other words, always telling the truth is the most important consideration
in a relationship. opposite of this is inarguably lying and if someone needs to lie,
either s/he is hiding something or is afraid of telling me something.
In any relationship of mine, I would wish that first of all, the person I'm dealing
with is honest. Even though s/he thinks that s/he did something wrong that I
wouldn't like, s/he'd better tell me the truth and not lie about it. Later on if I find out
about a lie or hear the truth from someone else, that'd be much more unpleasant. In
that case how can I ever believe or trust that person again? how can I ever believe
that this person has enough confidence in me to forgive him/her and carry on with
the relationship from there. So if I cannot trust a person anymore, if the person
doesn't think I can handle the truth, there's no point to continuing that relationship.
Although I would like to see altruistic, understanding, thoughtful and loyal
behavior from people, an instance of_ the opposite of these behaviors would not
upset me as much as dishonesty would. Among all the possible behaviors, dishonesty
is the only one for me that terminates how I feel about a person's reliability.
Therefore honesty would be my first concern and the most important consideration
in a relationship.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, i feel, such as, first of all, in other words, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1737.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 339.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12389380531 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98974500504 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545722713864 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1724501963 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.8 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 25.0 4.53405017921 551% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 29.0 5.5376344086 524% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161190263953 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585644139848 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550034350089 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0468213647308 0.150856017488 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617614040745 0.0645574589148 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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