Traffic and accommodation problems are increasing and the government should encourage businesses to move from cities to rural areas. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
traffic congestion and housing problems are increasing rapidly and the government should encourage businesses to relocate from urban areas to the countryside. this essay will discuss the pros and cons of this and why moving commercial ventures to rural areas has more benefits than drawbacks.
Admittedly, there are several advantages of relocating businesses into rural areas. this move will help in the development of backward regions. When the commercial setup is done in any area, it helps in other facilities as well, such as wider roads, more facilities, and improved living standards for locals. Moreover, housing is larger and cheaper in small towns. For instance, a small apartment in London is 3 times costlier than a villa in an Ipswich. Furthermore, companies can have more space at the same price in a small town.
On the other hand, there are several downsides associated with it. moving commercial areas to the countryside will increase pollution and a decline in the scenic beauty of small towns. As it is a well-known fact that industrialization increase air pollution, water pollution, and noise pollution, due to continuous construction, increased the population. For instance, Bangalore is known as a Silicon Vally of India, due to heavy industrialization in this city it a natural reservoir of water has declined and people struggle daily for drinking water.
To conclude, due to increased traffic and residential issues, the administration should persuade companies to move to the outskirts of the city. Although, it will help in the development of underdeveloped areas, whereas, increased pollution seems to be the biggest drawback. Disadvantages outweigh the advantages, and with proper planning and infrastructure, this aim can be achieved successfully.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, moreover, so, well, whereas, as to, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50902527076 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2194596899 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570397111913 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6892648488 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.733333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4666666667 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232715274012 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718768548649 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0923959539283 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140964001253 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764618019174 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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