Do you agree or disagree with following statement ? life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were childeren.
Technological developmet rapidly increased in ten years. we have the plenty of ability to reach information. When I try to think about my grandparents life and their chilhood, we have much better life condition and my several reasons the think in this way, having a online communication, having a better healt care and fell less social pressure.
The first reason that I think we have comfortable life is having a online communication.Inasmuch as after 2000 online communication increased and everyone started to have a computer or cell phone, and you can reach the people in the same time. Can you imagine without the phone ? I know the answer for most of us. Our granprarents did not have any communication in the past, when tehy go to army or different city it was not possible the have any information about them.
Second reason that way I am thinking is having better healt care is crucial attraction. Technological develoment effect in a good way with hospital and healt care. research getting faster and they can find a cure almost every sickness. Even in the small town you cand find a hospital to get cure because all hospital have communicate each other. due to fact that you always fell comfortable about your healt. For instance, couple years ago my mother had liver transplate and we could not belive that about the surgery. They took half liver of my brothers and put it in to my mother.
In addition after communication and healt care, less social pressure is also important detail.In our daily life we read and we see everything in our computer or cell phones, so it is breaks many off idea that old man say , we know the truth now from the true source, no one can jugme about my social life. My granparents time tatoos and princing restrict by goverment, because they believe it will break our traditional life style. Now one cares about traditional life style because world become glabol intstude.
ın conclusion after elaborating extensively about the topic, ı definitly agree that we have comfortable life then our parents. some people might be say that its not correct but vast majority believe that we have better condition then what they had.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, then, for instance, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1804.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 372.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84946236559 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78886618545 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561827956989 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.9473304473 48.9658058833 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9473684211 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5789473684 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.89473684211 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.5376344086 289% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100208379642 0.236089414692 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0334688935045 0.076458572812 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371720505134 0.0737576698707 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0604876036814 0.150856017488 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0115402324979 0.0645574589148 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 58.1214874552 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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