Demand of food is increasing worldwide. What cause of this? What measures can take to meet this demand.
I am convinced that the consumption of food is rising globally. However, Whether limited agricultural land can catch the rising food consumption in the future, becoming a topic of grave concern. It is happening because of the societies are changing from various aspects. Societies development is important, but they must be join hands and share knowledge and technology to counter the increasing food demands.
Societies are often changing their ways of living with population growth and enhancement in technology. Now days, more and more societies adopting the materialistic and consumerism culture, that leads to changing the eating habits. Moreover, population growth in societies are increasing the food consumption. According to the senses of 2011, world population is 6.9 billion, which is growing at about 3 percentage rate and going to cross the mark of 9 billion by 2030.
However, to combat with this issue nations should have to join hands and co-operate with each other, to raise crop production. Developed nations should share their knowledge and technology with developing countries to develop farming and food processing sectors. This food processing technology can increase the fertility rate of agriculture land and low the crop waste in lands. Moreover, scientist can develope hybrid crops and plants to tackle the problem of climate change. Apart from that, awareness campaigns and new laws by international community may be cut down the food wastage. A recently publish report by WHO, whom revealed that the world's near about 1/3 produced food wasted.
In conclusion, it summed up that no doubt increasing food demand is directly link with the population growth and eating habits of society. However, world government must be work together to tackle this situation before it become crises.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, may, moreover, so, apart from, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42605633803 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82571464611 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580985915493 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.6477795092 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.3125 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158816966552 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0513635336271 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048103922932 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0967754561983 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0461604497586 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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