In this contemporary world full of competitors, matured people from certain countries still prefer to live along with their parents under one roof even after completing their tertiary level education and finding a suitable job. The major advantage of living together is the quality time and love shared between mother-father and their wards, despite the fact that this action can deteriorate their career opportunities. This essay will discuss why the advantages of staying with family do in fact outweigh the disadvantages.
The utmost advantage rising from this decision is the time spent with old parents and grandparents in order to enhance mutual understanding and handle them with love. Moreover, almost every person after jumping to a specific age need their wards' to take care of them as they get more prone to age-related diseases and share their feelings and thoughts. Whenever any child needs any kind help in making crucial decision related to life, education or career, parents are the only one who can give a best advice in favor of their child rather than anyone else. Thus, parents and sons or daughters need to be bound under one roof.
However, one of the disadvantages related to this issue is compromising with the better job opportunities which one can only find by accommodating in metropolitan cities. For instance, a plethora of brilliant students are being graduated every year from various under-developed areas, but they do not get employed on the basis of their intelligence and mark sheets in their hometown because of lack of employment services. And as a result, they tend to live a miserable life. However, they can earn their livelihood only if they move out of there living areas. That is why; getting out of own town is must to earn basic needs.
In conclusion, many young people opt the living with their parents in order to spend time and share love with them despite knowing the fact that it may shatter their career. In my opinion, nothing can replace the importance of family; neither money nor success.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 495, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
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Line 3, column 601, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, so, still, thus, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00293255132 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69403962846 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595307917889 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.6678642549 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.857142857 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3571428571 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276064023491 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902407385662 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528034991107 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162817731979 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466248940931 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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