A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter:
-give contact details for when you are away
-give instructions about how to care for your pet
-describe other household duties
Dear Rora,
I hope you and your family are all well, and thank you for agreeing to house-sit during my vacation. It was such relive for me you look after my house.
I will stay the Hilton hotel in Bangkok. If the WiFi is available, you can reach me through my mobile. If not, you can call the Hilton hotel reception: 64797892999. I will inform you, if there are any changes.
As to my dog, Tina, goes out for at least 30 minutes to pee and poop as she is trained. As long as the weather is cloudy, there is an indoor dog part called Waggle Park. Plus, since her vet said she was fed up with too much than others, she has been on a diet so feed her twice a day only.
One more thing you need to keep in mind is that recently our neighbor’s car was stolen. The policeofficer suggested me to clean up the mail box unless robbers assume that no one is in my house.
I’ll see you as soon as I arrive.
Best wishes,
Myoungju.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, well, as to, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 787.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32417582418 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30017089299 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.681318681319 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.83505154639 327% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9200117077 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.5384615385 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.69230769231 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150517479281 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510900729953 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0643481013713 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0866286249311 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0900291320768 0.0580467560999 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 8.37731958763 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 91.11 70.7449484536 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.18 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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