It is argued that having to learn and speak a foreign language while living abroad can be problematic and intimidating. Although I agree that having to speak a different language can be complicated and difficult, I do not believe that it can cause serious problems.
On the one hand, there is no denying the fact that not being a native speaker in a country can lead to troublesome situations. Firstly, a foreigner might not understand fully the custom and traditions of the country he or she is living in. As a result, they can be offensive without being aware of it. For example, in Japanese make noise when eating if they want to compliment the cook while in other countries it is considered impolite. Secondly, communication can be challenging. Consequently, one might violate laws and regulations against their wills.
On the other hand, there are a variety of benefits to living in a foreign country. The first advantage is that you will experience a whole different culture and learn new things. By doing so, you will gain knowledge and grow yourself as a person. In addition, you can also make new friends and learn about the country as well as its history. Therefore, it is beneficial to live abroad and speak a foreign language.
In conclusion, while I agree that one might be experience difficulties in communication having to speak a foreign language, I would argue that it can create concerning issues.
- The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 67
- In spite of the advances made in agriculture many people around the world still go hungry Why is this the case What can be done about this problem 79
- The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.Summarise the Information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons whee relevant. 61
- Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1185.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89669421488 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92235249685 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54132231405 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.670044026 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6428571429 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2857142857 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0714285714 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340412534348 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111925093071 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0885083113599 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211325326974 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104311769814 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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