Today more people are traveling than ever before.
Why is this case?
What are the benefits of traveling for traveller?
Today, traveling becomes more common among people in comparison with the past. this trend is caused because of several reasons and has significant impacts on travelers, which I will outline.
When it comes to trips, there are various cornerstones, which make a profound contribution to stabilizing the popularity of traveling. Firstly, from a social point of view, different tv programs give people the opportunity to achieve a clear understanding of tourist attractions all around the world. so, these tv shows create desires and interests to visit other places. Besides that, arranging changeable travel plans, travel, and tourism industry makes this kind of activity more affordable for people from all walks of life. For example, people are able to select all accommodations in host spots like hotels, ticket and so forth based on their budget and diminish the cost of trips. these are very reasons why a plethora of people is attracted to travel.
Turning to benefits, the gains of travelling is immeasurable for travelers. From an interactional point of view, travelling to other countries and cities, not only do people have a chance to achieve information about other nations’ traditions and cultures, but also they can use this time to achieve investing situations and improve their business. For instance, although most of the times people travel for reaction aims, there are a cohort of people who use this time to appraise host places’ market in order that they can expand their companies in a new location and make more profits. Furthermore, being in touch with other societies, travelers are able to become knowledgable in different domains, which may be useful in their life. For example, most people use this experience to optimize their language skills and learn different languages, which has a vital rule nowadays.
In conclusion, media and various facilities make traveling more common, which affect people’s life financially and socially.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37820512821 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8822782555 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602564102564 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5133324113 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.857142857 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.92857142857 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.335084494254 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12906271517 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101803349216 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213153683267 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248808197801 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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