Owing to the generation gap, the growing number of grey-haired people are burgeoning. Considering this, some people subscribe to this belief that it would have a detrimental effect on their countries while others believe that they are highly imperative for the societal structure. Although the increasing ratio of older ones could make a country less productive, this essay believes the preservation of culture is only possible with the assistance of elderly people.
On the one hand, if the ratio of people who cross the retirement age is more as compared to younger ones, the productivity of the nation would be less. In other words, the more the aged community, the less efficient their health is. Since when the person gets matured, the efficiency of body organs would reduce in comparison to earlier stages of life. In addition, in order to access the technological sophistication, which is flourishing in this contemporary era, they could not compete with the young generation. In a number of instances, it can be seen that companies with employees above sixties are often considered at lower ranks in the 'Best Companies List'. However, I disagree with this viewpoint because the experience of these people is generally greater.
On the other hand, I opine with those who think that this old age group is beneficial for society as they have wider horizons of knowledge not only about social life but also of the gone-by eras. Taking this into consideration, they disseminate their immense knowledge to children and inculcates the moral as well as social values in them along with patriotism towards the country by giving information about the patriotists who sacrificed their lives for the nation. Thence, this old generation has a significant role in preserving culture. For example, in India, most of the youngsters are obedient and respect the whole community because their grandparents instill moral values in them.
To conclude, even though people may vary in their opinions as older people are more likely reducing the productiveness of nation by many, I still believe these people lay the foundation of the country be preserving the culture.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 78, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[1]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...le who cross the retirement age is more as compared to younger ones, the productiv...
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Line 7, column 229, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the country be preserving the culture.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, may, so, still, then, well, while, for example, in addition, as well as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1815.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18571428571 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83929999996 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.2717984973 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.642857143 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.78571428571 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229262559743 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753112877796 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591932870053 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152482658782 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564806297685 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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