As well as making money, businesses also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree?
Today, in the modern industrial world, enterprises have many contributions to the development of each country and society. I completely agree with the idea that businesses have both duties on finance, economic and community.
On the one hand, firms are created to earn money, provide works for employees as well as raise benefits. If enterprises did not make any income, they could not pay salaries to work-people. In the macroscopic matter, they could not hand in taxes to increase the national treasury leading the nation enrichments. Moreover, such businesses no longer need to make more and more money to expand their size with the aim of further growth, but offer better jobs and economic opportunities. For instance, Toyota, Unilever, Vin Group - you name it have being generated many jobs and incomes each years.
On the other hand, organizations take charge of the public. Not only the social institution but enterprises are also responsible for doing community good. The taxation in the government funds that they have submitted will be used to build roads, buildings, hospitals, schools, et cetera together with support people in the poor areas. Especially, by raising funds, they might carry out social projects such as planting trees, helping orphanages…Actually, jobs creating is one of the forms of social responsibility to reducing unemployment.
In conclusion, while businesses are almost formed to make profits, they also bring those benefits to develop themselves and the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, moreover, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44491525424 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05755527668 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.665254237288 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8714108176 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.083333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.91666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247218490673 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741216129499 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514120673254 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130708117212 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00894810257486 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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