The percentage of school aged boys in two different age groups who participated in 5 different sports in the UK in 2010.
Sports ----- boys 6-11---- boys 12-16
football 87 78
basketball 35 25
cricket 45 34
rugby 23 21
swimming 19 19
The table below illustrates the poportion of British boy in school aged in two different age groups who joined in 5 different sports in 2010.
It is clear from the table that the football account for the highest poportion of boys who participated in. In addition, the lowest percentage of sport that boys joined in is swimming.
On the one hand, percentage of football that boys from 6 to 11 years old participated in account for 87%. Moreover, it is account for 78% with group of boys from 6 to 12 to 16 years old. The basketball poportion of boys from 6 to 11 years old participated in account for 35%. And it decrease by 10% with the group of boys in the age of 12 to 16 years old.
On the other hand, the percentage of boys who joined in cricket accout for 45%. However, it falls to 34% with the group pf boys from 12 to 16 years old. The poportion of school boys in the age of 6 to 11 years old who participated in rugby account for 23%. Wheareas, it is less than 2% compare to this in the group of boys from 11 to 16 years old. Finally, the percentage of boys from 6 to 11 years old account for 19%. Nevertheless, this figure seem to be remains, compare to this with the group of 11 to 16 years old boys.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'decreases'?
Suggestion: decreases
...participated in account for 35%. And it decrease by 10% with the group of boys in the ag...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 33.7804878049 169% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 981.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 236.0 196.424390244 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.15677966102 4.92477711251 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48101090497 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.351694915254 0.547539520022 64% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.1 1.45097560976 76% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.9308926949 43.030603864 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.4615384615 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1538461538 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373720060335 0.215688989381 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.184784601178 0.103423049105 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0930863312128 0.0843802449381 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.286980530145 0.15604864568 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0909755363568 0.0819641961636 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 13.2329268293 54% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 95.5 61.2550243902 156% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 10.3012195122 43% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.55 11.4140731707 57% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.93 8.06136585366 74% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 40.7170731707 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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