Fossil fuels are the main source of energy for most countries. However, alternative source of energy (wind and solar) have been encouraged to be used by some countries. To what extent is this a positive or negative development?
Human's reliability on fossil fuels has been always a debatable topic over the years. Even today, many countries completely relay on these forms of energy while some take an extra effort to promote other forms of energy production. This essay will discuss the new development and reach a sensible conclusion.
To begin with, fossil fuel, a non-renewable energy, is running out. To exemplify, a study conducted by an American university has revealed that, at present, crude oil is vanishing at a rate of 4 billion tonne per year, and if this trend continues, these oil reserves will dry out within 50 years. In addition to that burning of fossil fuels aggravates various environmental issues, for huge carbon dioxide flames are emitted from this process so that UV rays from the sun get trapped in the earth's atmosphere, and it leads to global warming.
Besides, the renewable energy sources such as sunlight and wind are abundance in supply. Because of that, there is no need to concern about its availability in the earth: it helps many a countries, where fossil fuel deposits are inadequate to meet their demands, to stand on their own feet by reducing fossil fuel import from alien lands. Apart from this, during power production, these alternative energy sources leave zero chance for carbon dioxide emission compare to conventional forms, and the conservation of environment is guaranteed up to an extent.
To sum up, even though many nations still depend on fossil fuels, the time has arrived to find an alternative sources like solar and wind energy, which are comparatively less polluting, for the sustainable development of countries.As such, there is no doubt that if governments promote this constructive methods, the better will be the result.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 186, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a country' or simply 'countries'?
Suggestion: a country; countries
...vailability in the earth: it helps many a countries, where fossil fuel deposits are inadequ...
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Line 13, column 232, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...he sustainable development of countries.As such, there is no doubt that if governm...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so, still, while, apart from, in addition, no doubt, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12371134021 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73885532938 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642611683849 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.0779662293 49.4020404114 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.1 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.9 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290696808314 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10311241634 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558953006307 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167865293959 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635639696349 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.01 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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