Some people think that economic progress is the only way to measure a country’s success, while other think that there are other factors which can be used to measure a country’s success. What are the factors and among them which one is more important than others?
Many people see a country which is economy or financially well maintained as a successful country. Whereas, there are a plethora of factors including civilian’s happiness, scientific and technological contribution of the nation in the world, development in space science, medical advancement, well-developed education system and so on, can be seen as factors to measure any nations success. I see efficient schooling/education as the most factor among the rest.
To begin with, it is much more important for any nation to bring happiness and joy to civilians. If people are satisfied with the government services, the nation may be called successful in self. Secondly, the country who contributes to the welfare of rest developing nations through scientific and technological up-gradation, is another measure of successfulness. Moreover, every continent are trying to do the best in space technology and achieving milestones in it. India, for instance, had successfully launched space shuttle to explore Mars, whose benefits would be shared equally to all nations. Along with this, there are still certain critical illnesses such as cancer and Hiv, which are widely spread and curable up to an only a minimum extent. If a nation’s medical does some miracles in stated direction, that also can be seen as a success of that nations. As stated achievements in the field of science and technology, medical and space science are the other factors that make the country’s success.
out of all, education is the most basic factor, which is the only root to those all stated factors. In spite of the good financial stability of the nation maybe because of geographic and historic advantages the country may not survive if it lacks in the education system. Finland, for example, a tiny nation compared to the USA and India, in both area and population-wise, is the most successful nation in my sight. And its proven effective education system is the only reason that people from all around the world come to study there, These, in turn, develop the country’s economy through foreign student and tourism. As a reason, the education system is the only important factor than others, when it is all about the country’s success.
Science, space, happiness, and education are the various elements on which the well-being of any countries can be measured, not only on financial stability. In conclusion, fundamental education with a sense of co-operation and competition the vital factor behind the success of any nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
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Suggestion: Out
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, well, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in spite of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2133.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 404.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2797029703 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14706673218 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522277227723 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 669.6 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1644210153 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.5 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4444444444 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38888888889 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3217074095 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106180666167 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066865512764 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212711702468 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034004649233 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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