The table contains information about the different ethnic groups making up the population of Atlantis City over two decades.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The table provides information about the population constituent over the past 20 years in Atlantis city.
By 2008 the total population in Atlantis increased by almost twofold form 89 thousand in 1988. Caucasian was always the dominant race throughout that period though the proportion kept a decreasing trend, dropping from 68 percent to below a half percent of the total population.
All other races kept growing rapidly. The second largest group of people in Atlantis was Polynesian. 16 thousand of them lived in Atlantis in 1988 and in 2008 roughly 20 thousands more of them moved to the city, comprising nearly a quarter of the total population. S. E. Asian residence presented a similar growing trend. There were only 11 thousand S.E.Asian people in 1988 but that number rose to 35 thousand in 2008, taking up nearly a quarter of the total population.
Indian took up the smallest part in Atlantis while the number of whom grew from 2000 to 2500 in 1998 and the percentage stayed unchanged during the first decade. The last decades witnessed a sharp growth in indian people to 8500.
Overall, S. E. Asian in Atlantis increased the most during the past two decades while the dominant population Caucasian shrink in terms of their proportion.
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increased by almost twofold form 89 thousand in 1988.
increased by almost twofold from 89 thousand in 1988.
16 thousand of them lived in Atlantis in 1988 and in 2008 roughly 20 thousands more of them moved to the city
16 thousand of them lived in Atlantis in 1988, and in 2008 roughly 20 thousands more of them moved to the city
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