Some people feel that entertainers such as film stars, pop musicians or sports stars are paid too much money.
Do you agree or disagree?
Which other types of job should be highly paid?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In recent years, there has been a debate about whether celebrities, for example, movie stars, singers or sports players are highly paid than their abilities. It is put forward by some people that entertainers have rights to be paid expensive as they have no privacy. The opponents, on the other hand, argue that their wages are incredibly high. this essay will illustrate both viewpoints surrounding this issue before coming to a reasoned conclusion.
On the one hand, there are some people who hold the view that entertainers should be paid high rates. These people present several arguments, but the most persuasive one is perhaps that stars’ names are one of the brand’s names. In other words, they paid a lot of efforts to be a super star and public evaluated their capacities highly. For example, there are some entertainers who are not famous get paid less than other carriers. Another point often made by the proponents of this view is popular artists should get paid more as they sacrifice their lives for public’s entertainments and they have no privacy as they have disclosure faces. For example, almost people want to gain a guarantee when they contribute their efforts for others, thus celebrities should be paid enough.
On the other hand, there are opposite viewpoint that celebrities get paid too much. One of the most convincing arguments they present is that most of artists are famous due to their appearance but they have no talents to be paid a lot. this is evidenced by the fact that people in current years prefer to watch fantasy life which they cannot accept in real life. For example, many actors and singers in idol group don’t act or singing well, but they are popular due to their mask. As well as this, these people argue that there are some particular jobs should be paid more than people with fame. this is because there are many jobs truly sacrifice their life for others and people should respect their values. To illustrate, specialists such as firefighters and polices work in dangerous situations and they should be paid more than artists.
To sum up, it can be observed that there are two contradicting viewpoints in relation to celebrity’s payment. To choose which side I am on, I believe that they have got too much pay. Although they have no privacy, it is also their choice to be showed.
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also, but, if, so, thus, well, for example, such as, as well as, in other words, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 13.1623246493 220% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1986.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 401.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95261845387 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47492842339 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62514997035 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.496259351621 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 601.2 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8564681608 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.05 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244242205762 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925681560677 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0574750779532 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160264179086 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0561932004068 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.