Some people say history is one the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Many believe History is one of the school courses that should be considered very essential while others argue that in these days and age other branches such as Science and technology deserve more attention. In my view every branch of science is important and essential, therefore, we should not choose one and leave the others.
Many people consider History as the most needed subject and it is mostly due to the fact that humankind tends to repeat its behaviour over the time, in other words, we people repeat what our previous generations did and almost get the same results therefore, if we study history we could learn a lot from what our ancestors did and what they achieve by that and what were its consequences. If we figure out what they did wrong and what made them successful, then it is possible to avoid their mistakes and copy their success accordingly.
As opposed to the view of people who think History is the number one subject to study in schools there is another view who prefer science and technology. If we only focus on the History then there will be no future and innovation because it is the innovations resulted from science that enabled humans to prosper. In other words the huge development of countries and nations, mainly resulted from technology and to continue it we should study this branch more and more.
In conclusion, even though there are two opposing beliefs about the importance of history in comparison with science and technology, I think both of them are essential and should be considered equally important.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, if, so, then, therefore, while, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my view, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1300.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88721804511 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55417860924 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545112781955 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.492137976 49.4020404114 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.5 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.25 20.7667163134 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239658578137 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10999572152 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682101946814 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149682646337 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519938329192 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.0946893788 139% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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