Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History.
Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
In this contemporary world majority of people believe that history is one of the crucial subject taught in schools where as according to others science and technology plays an important role. both the subjects have their own importance. With the rapid growth in technical field knowledge of science is also necessary but it doesnt not make other subjects less important. according to me history is also as important as science and equal knowledge of both the subjects are required.
Knowing about the history of place and the surroundings is very important. students should be aware about the evolution and what all happened before them. learning about the past helps us in getting ready for the future. if one are not aware about what all happened before them , they might not be able to proceed further.For instance In indian schools students should be taught about the independence. they should have knowledge regarding all the freedom fighters. Most of them can turn into inspiration for some children.they will definitely learn something from them.
On the other hand science is also as important as history. To keep pace with the increasing advancement in technology , it is necessary to have knowledge about it. Moreover every second thing these days is about technology. if you are from science background you tend of have many options career wise. There are increasing number of jobs in this field.
In conclusion , both the subjects hold equal importance at schools but with the advancement in technology it is important for students to keep up with the increasing pace.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, regarding, second, so, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18532818533 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73642561992 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525096525097 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.613436904 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9375 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1875 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22319236869 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0748586729301 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090849728257 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148076431461 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0951542283837 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.