In many countries, more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally. Why people buy imported food? What could be done to encourage people to buy local food?
When it comes to food there are many options to choose from and they have vast inclination towards the consumption of food from other countries. However majority of the people tend to opt for food that is exported from other areas than buying the food that is processed locally. Certainly there are many driving forces behind this some of them are curiosity to try out international cuisines and affordable cost. There are many things that can be done to promote the locally produced food items such as eliminating food taxes and organizing competitions to promote chemical free local items. The essay will discuss the fourth points said .
With regards to the internationally processed food , there are many reasons why people tend to buy these food items. Firstly due to the curiosity of trying out food from foreign land people tend to get into the venture of buying it. For instance the delicacies from china , Italy and other countries are much prominently and easily available all over the world. Secondly the international food items are easily available in nearby supermarkets and also at very affordable rates .Hence , due to easy availability and reduced rates people tend to buy these products more.
In order to increase the consumption of locally produced food items , the government can reduce the taxes and local charges applied on the local food items. According to a survey , because of reduced taxes there was an increase of 8% in the goods and items of local companies. Furthermore , instead of having long lasting preserved food , which might contain added preservatives , people could be encouraged to consume healthy and fresh food which contain less chemicals produced by local vendors. Consequently the consumption of local food will increase.
To conclude ,the people are interested in trying out the continental food because of the easy availability and less cost. Although by reducing food related taxes and other taxes on items plus spreading awareness regarding the healthy food intake can increase the sales of local food companies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, regarding, second, secondly, so, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1738.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20359281437 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69865982191 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505988023952 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5233273535 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.866666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.93333333333 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.47611577495 0.244688304435 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.169539215898 0.084324248473 201% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112814960214 0.0667982634062 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.302850933142 0.151304729494 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474115352482 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.