Teenagers's treatments
Teenagers education and training as the most significant societies’ future contractors have been discussed amid scholars, scientists and parents for many years. varied items have to be concerned about teens, their treatments, body physiology changes, hobbies leisure activities and relationships recognition, and those may offer us a more constructive approach to deal with this phenomenon. I believe that considering their particular manners in this age may aid us to decide cautiously.
Waking up in the morning at a specific time had entirely been a conflict and aggravation among teens and parents. Science has given a remarkable evidence to be on teenagers side, which is circadian clock. Our body’s sleep-wake cycle is under controlled by circadian clock, determining asleep and waking up time. Surprisingly, circadian clock during the teenage years would shift forward approximately four hours, affecting on their sleep habits. For instance, a teenage, who used to go to the bed 9 P.M. and wake up at 6 A.M., not only do the teens prefers to sleep late midnight, but they also would wake up late, consequently. Researchers has proofed that sleep deprivation in teenagers has treble effects, which teenagers neither be able to concentrate at home, nor they are alert at school, in order their brains are not able to develop effectively.
In contrary of previous researches, believing that most prominent part of main development occurs in the womb and during the first three years, scientists have illustrated teen years perform one of the most important role of brain expansion by pruning away unused cells and produce plenty of new cells.
To conclude, I attend that considering this period of children age by giving them the opportunities to show their abilities, motivate them and prompt their brain development, to have a society with bright future is inevitable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 167, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Varied
... scientists and parents for many years. varied items have to be concerned about teens,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, may, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 31.9359605911 147% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1207.87684729 133% => OK
No of words: 298.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37583892617 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0435039157 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 139.433497537 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651006711409 0.580463131201 112% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 379.143842365 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.931034482759 430% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.4362348126 50.4703680194 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.636363636 104.977214359 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0909090909 20.9669160288 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 7.25397266985 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0780497336555 0.242375264174 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0341795251323 0.0925447433944 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463676028492 0.071462118173 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0325526926124 0.151781067708 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375501434439 0.0609392437508 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 12.6369458128 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 53.1260098522 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 11.5310837438 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 55.0591133005 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.94827586207 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.5123152709 124% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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