You rented a car from a Car Rental Company. The air conditioner has stopped working. You phoned the company a week ago but it still has not been repaired.
Write a letter to the company. In your letter
- introduce yourself
- explain the situation
- say what action you would like to company to take.
I am writing to explain my frustrations with recent experience I had at your company. I was surprised at what happened when I rented car and drove it.
The air conditioner did not work properly and after some days it stopped its work. I phoned you for repairing air conditioner a week ago, but it still has not been rectified.
I always purchased parts of car from your company and all of them worked regularly. I always recommended your company my entire relatives and neighbors until I bought car from your company because you had never sold cars and its parts which have flaws for gaining money. Now i am a bit hesitant to believe your company after this incident and although I phoned and clarified my dissatisfaction related to the air conditioner of car, but you did not incline to tackle my problem.
I hope to hear back about the unfortunate incident as soon as possible at 994555982895 and via email at asdf@live.ru.
Sincerely
Agil
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- You rented a car from a Car Rental Company. The air conditioner has stopped working. You phoned the company a week ago but it still has not been repaired.Write a letter to the company. In your letter- introduce yourself- explain the situation- say what ac 60
I was surprised at what happened when I rented car and drove it.
I was surprised at what happened after I rented the car and drove it.
I always recommended your company my entire relatives and neighbors
I always recommended your company to my entire relatives and neighbors
flaws:
A little bit out of topic:
'...until I bought car from your company because you had never sold cars and its parts which have flaws for gaining money.'
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.0 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
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No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
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Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.595 4.0
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