In some countries the average worker is obliged to retire at the age of 50 while in others is obliged to retire until they are 65 or 70 Until what age do you think people should be encouraged to remain in paid employment

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In some countries the average worker is obliged to retire at the age of 50, while in others is obliged to retire until they are 65 or 70. Until what age do you think people should be encouraged to remain in paid employment?

These days, almost all people strive to earn money in order to need their basic needs. To implement it, they should work. However, since certain age they retire. In some countries retirement age is 50; whereas others require people to work until they are 65 or 70 years old. In my opinion, people should be paid for work as long as they are able to perform their duties properly and retirement should also depend on the kind of work. In this essay, I will make an effort to support my view via some specific examples and reasons.

Firstly, retirement age should depend on the type of work. For exa...

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