A large company in your area has decided to spend a certain amount of money, either to sponsor a local children’s sports team for two years, or to pay for two open-air concerts. It has asked for feedback from the general public.
Write a letter to the company.
In your letter:
describe the benefits of sponsoring the sports team
summarise the benefits of paying for the concerts
say how you think the company should spend the money
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to give my feedback on your decision to invest in our community either by sponsoring a local sport’s team for two years or by paying for two open-air concerts.
First of all I would like to tell you that we have a very good football team which already won a lot of tournaments in our state. This is very good decision to sponsor a local team for two years this will definitely help them to hire a renowned couch which will groom their abilities.
Sponsoring a local team will also promote your brand.
On the other hand paying for two open air concerts is also a good decision. This will helpful for local musicians to perform first time in the history of our town. This will definitely be entertaining for our community.
I my opinion sponsoring a local sports team is a better idea. Paying for concert will entertain people only for some hours but sponsoring a sports team for two years is a long term benefit for our community.
Yours faithfully,
Muhammad Zubair
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, so, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 856.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72928176796 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55461392745 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552486187845 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7247522952 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 4.34317383033 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380813323721 0.216113520407 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164734371274 0.0766984524023 215% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123512183494 0.0603063233224 205% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25297884077 0.12726935374 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134168580347 0.0580467560999 231% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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