Young people are more energetic and enthusiastic than older people. In young age people life is more colorful and enjoyable than older people. Most of the people in the world even the older people believe that old people can not enjoy life more than the young people. This essay will discuss why young people enjoy more than the older people.
To begin with, with the increase of age people's responsibility also increase. A younger people face less responsibility than an older people. older people have to take care of the young member of the family. comparing to the older people the young member of a family face less responsibility than a older member. And lack of responsibility provide young people more chance to enjoy life than the older people. Besides, as a older person think them more reponsible to support other and this encourage them to sensible and create a mind to sacrifice the enjoyment. In contrary, young people give priority to enjoyment rather than took responsibility and this make their life more enjoyable.
however, young people are more enthusiastic than the older people. They find the life more enjoy able than the older one. with the increase of age people find the sane thing less enjoyable which once they found as enjoyable event. It is the people mind setup that we have grown up enough and it is not suppose to do by us in this age etc. make them away from enjoyment. In the other hand, young people are more enthusiastic than older people they find most of the thing enjoyable and do everything and do not fear to go anythere and make them enjoying life.
Moreover, the two important things to enjoy life are energy and health. young people find are more energetic and healthier than old people. older people suffer from diseases and have lack of energy that need to enjoy life. people became more vulnerable to diseases with the increase of age and these prevent them enjoy the life.
Young people are more energetic, enthusiastic, and colorful mind than the older people. And older people are more vulnerable to diseases than young people. And because of following reason young people can enjoy more than the older people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, moreover, so, thus, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 43.0788530466 49% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1802.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 372.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84408602151 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39173103935 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40478888813 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 212.727598566 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.349462365591 0.524837075471 67% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 580.5 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2245882426 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.0833333333 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54166666667 5.45110844103 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.592199797244 0.236089414692 251% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.262337601136 0.076458572812 343% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130622767078 0.0737576698707 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.43403178017 0.150856017488 288% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611314547195 0.0645574589148 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.12 8.01818996416 76% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 86.8835125448 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 61.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.5 Out of 30
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