Why some people believe that doctors and teachers should be paid more than sport and entertainment people. To what extent do you agree of disagree
The world is filled with achievers, number of celebrities and athletes makes proud moments to their nations, not only these well-known people but millions of professional who perform remarkable task in their routine also deserve these applause. However there is a big difference in their earning pattern, in this essay, the changes in earning pattern will discuss with supportive evidences in following paragraphs.
In general, well-recognise people earn respect and money together and its in bulk not in pieces, where as, noble profession people such as doctors, teachers, engineers, lawyers deal every day real life challenges somehow they save human lives by, providing timely treatments, saving them from death penalties, creating shelters for nation and educating them for better future. The common people, who performs these outstanding task on daily basis, deserve more but they are unrecognised faces and less-popular in society or country and full time employees where they are not permitted to raise their voices for increments and their wages quota selected by government authorities.
For example, a doctor treat a patient from deadly disease and provide one more opportunity to survive in a world earn less than a movie star give one entertainment movie to country and earn 10times more than a life-saver.
In addition, the coach, who trained athletes earn less as compare to the star sportsman who learn from that person because that athlete is a face of team not the trainer. Another fact behind it, that people who do daily 9-5 job they earn on monthly basis but this is not even 10 percent enough what a sport-person or a film- star earning from their single project.
In conclusion, I believe that if governments cannot increase the salaries of a common person so it should decrease the level of earning of celebrities by which somehow balance living standard starts and all kinds of people treated equally under the same roof.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91881918819 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87121863694 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579335793358 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 67.0 20.2975951904 330% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 169.366466575 49.4020404114 343% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 333.25 106.682146367 312% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 67.75 20.7667163134 326% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183388015269 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109788110019 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0303817772774 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109788110019 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303817772774 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.6 13.0946893788 272% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 3.47 50.2224549098 7% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.4 11.3001002004 260% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.44 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.57 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.8 10.1190380762 285% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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