Today, more and more students have problems of bad hehavior, such as school bully, breaking school rules, disrespecting teachers and so on. This problems are seemed to spread all over the world and the family is the main responsiblilty for them.
One of the main reasons is that working parents have busy careers, which lead them to pay less time to look after their children. It makes parents to feel guilty for their children. So they give more material things rather than love and attention to compensate their children. In addition to that, grandparents aslo spoil their grandchildren, although they have more time to accompany with their grandchildren. For example, in China, most of grandparents are responsible to send their grandchildren to go to school. They help their grandchildren to take the schoolbags and breakfasts on the way to school. In this situation, children are more likely sopilt by their families. They can get whatever they want and do whatever they please without thinking about family burden. So children can not develop their self-control and do not understand how important the good behavior is.
If parents can change their attitudes to their children, the problems can be solved easily. First of all, parents should know it is harmful for children to be sopilt. Parents should teach their children good manner and let them know the difference between right and wrong. Secondly, parents can take their children to take part in some activities, which can develop the children's teamwork and cooperation skills. The children can also learn how to respect each other during the period. Thirdly, grandparents should not do everything for their grandchildren, they should encourage their children do things by themselves.
Schools and government can also take some measures to deal with the matters. Teachers can contact parents frequently about the behavior of their children at school. Governmant can set up some free classes for parents to learn how to nurture their children. All the above can be done to resolve the issues.
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- The number of traffic accidents is rising in many countries. Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the only way to reduce traffic accidents. Do you agree or disagree? 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 141, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
...ules, disrespecting teachers and so on. This problems are seemed to spread all over ...
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Line 3, column 435, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the grandparents') or simply say ''most grandparents''.
Suggestion: most of the grandparents; most grandparents
...r grandchildren. For example, in China, most of grandparents are responsible to send their grandchil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example, in addition, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17664670659 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74373877723 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511976047904 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.2847653383 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.3333333333 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9047619048 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.045926827921 0.244688304435 19% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0185907549841 0.084324248473 22% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03148880301 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0454224399306 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453613132303 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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