Don't have a term-time holiday.
This is mainly indicates that the government will ban all kinds of absence which has been used to take them time breaks. By providing concrete facts, as Russell Hobby goes, although holidays outside of term time cost highly, a child’s education is more crucial than a holiday. In my view, I deem that parents should stop term-time holiday. Here is my reasons.
Firstly, it is impossible for children to give up study. As we all know, study is students’ primary task. There is no doubt that we need to learn what we should acknowledge firstly before we take a break, though having holiday is a kind of potential learning as well.
Secondly, it is uncomfortable for children to make up for missed classes after a term-time holiday.If the short vacation makes their learning level drops significantly, children will become diffident inevitably. So why do things that cost more than they cost? If I were you, I wouldn't be penny wise and pound foolish. Parents are supposed to think long term for children.
Thirdly, it is unsuitable for parents to only worry the high cost of holiday outside of term time. With the society and science development, the cost of living and entertainment is really high. However, money can't cancel the surface damage and potential damage. Parents should attach importance to lifelong development rather than taking an early vacation to save money.Parents are the best role models for their children.
In conclusion, the ban of term-time holiday is correct, and it is beneficial to children’s study and life. As is suggested, the government have to take strict action to improve this kind of culture.
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Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, in conclusion, kind of, no doubt, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.0 257% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 5.60731707317 428% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 965.302439024 141% => OK
No of words: 273.0 196.424390244 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99267399267 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75337535088 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 106.607317073 158% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 283.868780488 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 1.53170731707 392% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 1.07073170732 654% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 8.94146341463 190% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.5307470891 43.030603864 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.1764705882 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0588235294 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35294117647 5.23603664747 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.13902439024 439% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29922932774 0.215688989381 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910350549022 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108052327291 0.0843802449381 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176973411889 0.15604864568 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0918493443417 0.0819641961636 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 40.7170731707 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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