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Don't have a term-time holiday

This essay mainly indicates that the government will prohibit all kinds of absence which has been used to take them time breaks. By providing concrete facts, as Russell Hobby goes, although holidays outside of term time cost highly, a child’s education is more crucial than a holiday. In my view, I deem that parents should stop term-time holiday. Here are my reasons.
Firstly, it is impossible for children to give up study. As we all know, study is students’ primary task. There is no doubt that we need to learn what we should acknowledge firstly before we take a break, though having holiday is a kind of potential learning as well.
There is one more point that it is uncomfortable for children to make up for missed classes after a term-time holiday.If the short vacation makes their learning level drop significantly, children will become diffident inevitably. So why do things that cost more than they cost? Provided that I were you, I wouldn't be penny wise and pound foolish. Parents are supposed to think long term for children.
Last but not least, it is unsuitable for parents to only worry the high cost of holiday outside of term time. With the society and science development, the cost of living and entertainment is really high. However, money can't eliminate the surface damage and potential damage. Parents should attach importance to lifelong development rather than taking an early vacation to save money.Parents are the best role models for their children.
In conclusion, the ban of term-time holiday is correct, and it is beneficial to children’s study and life. As is suggested, the government have to take strict action to improve this kind of culture.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: If
...issed classes after a term-time holiday.If the short vacation makes their learning...
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Line 3, column 306, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
... they cost? Provided that I were you, I wouldnt be penny wise and pound foolish. Parent...
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Line 4, column 220, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...tainment is really high. However, money cant eliminate the surface damage and potent...
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Line 4, column 384, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Parents
... taking an early vacation to save money.Parents are the best role models for their chil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, really, so, well, in conclusion, kind of, no doubt, in my view

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98581560284 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71421877382 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617021276596 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 52.8028912913 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7058823529 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5882352941 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64705882353 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29605368329 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0900165934755 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107029852503 0.0667982634062 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175277392695 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0917124009842 0.056905535591 161% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, really, so, well, in conclusion, kind of, no doubt, in my view

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