Human have achieved great success in his journey. It has been said that when we successed we have to secryfy something. In todays world, when a country grows the technology,
Human have achieved great success in his journey. It has been said that when we successed we have to secryfy something. In todays world, when a country grows the technology, the conventional skills and the actual rethym of life die out. In this essay, I would like to support my views with example.
Today, technology have provided us markable help and support to our daily life. From the last three decades information technology is booming and it is used in every industry, it is in medical scince, automobiles and in finicial organizations. without using technology no business can survive normaly. For example, technology like SQL and Oracal helps maximum businesses to store their critical data into systematic table format, so a authorized person can easily alter, modify or create them from any corner of the world. Further more, Google has almost all the information which is indeed required for students, travelers and researchers.
Generally, people are following current trand which is relly on social life style by using applications like Facebook, Instgram, Whatsapp, etc. because of that we are lacking in our traditional skills. Many country have it's own history and cultural values like language, traditional cloths, festivals and food, which should be follow and should be given to their childrens. For example, In india people enjoy multiple festivals like Ganesh chaturthi, Maker Sankranti, Navratri, etc. to protect our ancient knowledge we should celebrite it with family or society. to protect such traditional way of life government should give special holiday on such days.
In conclution, I would like to say that we should balance our life by chossing our mordan life style during working days and by chossing traditional way of life on holiday.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-10-20 | kajalbhuva | 84 | view |
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- Some people use the internet to search for solutions to their medical problems is it a positive or negative development? give your own opinion and examples from your experience. 78
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Suggestion: Without
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Did you mean 'followed'?
Suggestion: followed
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28070175439 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72144567161 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628070175439 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.5326596803 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0625 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8125 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.1875 7.06120827912 17% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270809389093 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10825982496 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.19065713993 0.0667982634062 285% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208311690746 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.282834203809 0.056905535591 497% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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