Stress – related illnesses are becoming increasingly common
- What do you think are the causes of this?
- What solutions can you suggest?
People are increasingly suffering from sicknesses as a result of stress. There are so many causes which increases stress - related illnesses including long working hours at office and increasing work pressure will also suggest to solution to these problems including improving ones work-life balance and diet.
In today’s corporate world people are working for longer hours with work pressure to achieve targets in competitive domain for example, some people wants higher position and higher paying jobs for that they do overtime and take the additional responsibility to prove them self-better than other, Nowadays most of the people work on computer for that they have to seat on one place for longer time which leads to obesity, for this reason physical and mental stress increasing.
Maintaining a good work-life balance and improving one’s diet are both important to overcome the stress related illnesses. People need to realize that if they live only for work or money than they will suffer either mentally or physically. For example, employees should stop working on weekends, they have to take regular breaks from work to socialize with family and friends, healthy diet and regular exercise should be included in regular routine. Therefore, in order to reduces stress balance is required between work and healthy diet, exercises.
In conclusion, in today’s fast moving world more and more people are becoming ill as a result of stress. This essay discussed how stress is often caused by long working hours and intense work pressure and also suggested that the solution to this problem is to manage a better work-life balance and to eat a healthier diet. It is common believe that an apple a day keeps the doctor away like that regular exercise and healthier diet keeps stress away.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21649484536 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59308772691 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553264604811 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.278241512 49.4020404114 229% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 151.8 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132634330779 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657513906847 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508722103254 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102045267822 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0701309058516 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.59 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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