Information revolution has changed the way of mass communication and had some negative effects on individual lives as well on society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The revolution in information and communication has changed the world. The effect of this revolution can be seen in all aspects of life whether its our personal life or professional life. It has changed the way people use to live their life. The information revolution has changed the ways of mass communication and it has both negative and poistive impact on our life as well as on society.
In today's era, its impossible to live without smartphones and internet. People can communicate easily with their loved ones from any part of world. Not only they can voice call, but technology has made it possible that people can video call even if they are thousands of kilometer away from each other. Technology is removing the barriers and bringing us together. With internet, its easy to access information, to interact with our family on social media sites.
But with positive points, negative effects are also their. Some people use technology in a bad way and make wrong use of it by posting wrong information on internet. These type of actions can be misleading. Sometimes people become addicted to social media and smartphones which can be very bad for health.
Overall, we can say that this revolution is for the good of human beings if used in the correct way. Otherwise it can lead to bad situations.

Votes
Average: 5.5 (1 vote)
Essay Categories
PTE_Academic

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 145, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
... be seen in all aspects of life whether its our personal life or professional life....
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Line 1, column 219, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...nal life. It has changed the way people use to live their life. The information rev...
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Line 3, column 86, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a bad way" with adverb for "bad"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... also their. Some people use technology in a bad way and make wrong use of it by posting wro...
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Line 4, column 101, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Otherwise,
...uman beings if used in the correct way. Otherwise it can lead to bad situations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1085.0 1207.87684729 90% => OK
No of words: 224.0 242.827586207 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84375 5.00649968141 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72020838201 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 139.433497537 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 379.143842365 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3372813264 50.4703680194 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.3333333333 104.977214359 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9333333333 20.9669160288 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 7.25397266985 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 2.75862068966 217% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192565401195 0.242375264174 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0783812285568 0.0925447433944 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107145293643 0.071462118173 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115596509227 0.151781067708 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107413490053 0.0609392437508 176% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 12.6369458128 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.9458128079 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.2 11.5310837438 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 55.0591133005 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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