Students with degrees earn high salary than who doesn’t have an academic qualification. Therefore, some argue that they have to pay the full cost of their courses. Give your opinion.

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Students with degrees earn high salary than who doesn’t have an academic qualification. Therefore, some argue that they have to pay the full cost of their courses. Give your opinion.

In this modern world, education is considered basic building block of a human life. It is considered that without a degree a student always struggle for earn high salary whereas there are some people those hold opinion that earning does not have any relationship with education of an individual. This contentious topic has been profoundly debated in several forums. I will discuss both the views meticulously and give my opinion from a bird's eye stance.

Throwing light on the first view, there is a lot of competition in contemporary world because for a single job vacancy you will find that there are hundreds applicants so there is only option to select best among them is compare education qualification of student. A student who is more educated will be preferred option for promotion or job vacancy because that is only rejection method available.

Paradoxically, we have many examples in real life those have proved that education is not that much important to achieve anything. A common man has abilities to become successful with his hard work and intelligence which does not require any education background. For instance, Bill Gates and Steve Jobs are the best example because both played CEO roles in their respective companies but both does not have any management degree.

To summaries, although education is important to become a good learner and stand unique from a crowd, success in career depends on intelligence and dedication of a person which makes him successful.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 46, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is modern world, education is considered basic building block of a human life. It...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, whereas, for instance

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.75862068966 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1257.0 1207.87684729 104% => OK
No of words: 244.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15163934426 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81646250321 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635245901639 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2523417259 50.4703680194 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.7 104.977214359 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4 20.9669160288 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 7.25397266985 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158867277531 0.242375264174 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591040890387 0.0925447433944 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805328741213 0.071462118173 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0841419963675 0.151781067708 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0760006138676 0.0609392437508 125% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 12.6369458128 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 11.5310837438 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.32886699507 107% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 85.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 77.0 Out of 90
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