In the contemporary era, consumerism has been flourishing at alarming rates. Considering this, people prefer products for a short period of time and after some time they put them in dustbins. The main reasons for this trend have a lot of variety of products as well as a high remuneration of people. Pollution and limited access to resources are the main problems that arise from this issue.
To begin with, wider range of variety in every type of product is the most prominent cause. This is because with cutting-edge technology it has become easier for manufacturers producing things: clothes, toys, and utensils in unlimited supply. Another reason is the increased wages of employees which makes them convenient investing heavily in goods without thinking even a second thought. After getting remuneration, rather than saving it, people tend to spend an exorbitant amount of money on manufacturing goods. Despite the fact that they have already an adequate supply of things, they just want to satisfy their inner needs because they are highly fascinated by those things and are more likely to buy them.
The major problems that arise are pollution and limited resources. Most of the materialistic things are made of plastics which is a non-biodegradable and can remain in the soil upto millions of years, consequently, deteriorate the health of sea animals as most of the garbage is put in the rivers. Moreover, products are manufactured from natural resources. When these are made in tremendous amounts, leading to the destruction of resources owing to which there would be limited access.
To conclude, throwaway society is becoming popular, but it gives rise to various problems such as climate change and diminishing of natural resources. The reasons for these problems are greater access to choices and high incomes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...his, people prefer products for a short period of time and after some time they put them in du...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, moreover, second, so, well, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23050847458 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84565318128 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606779661017 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7359485716 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.866666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0954240906208 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0281294084415 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448708734695 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0529574692251 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251458316386 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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