You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.
Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter:
- describe the problem with the equipment
- explain how this problem is affecting your work
- say what you want the shop or company to do
I am writing this letter with regard to the equipments which are supplied to our company. I am the area manager of the company .I am the self user of the equipments provided by your company.
i am associated with this company for last 5 years.This is the first time i am facing big trouble with this equipment.Battery backup of this device is very poor. This is providing four hours back rather than 6 hours as committed in the booklet.Moreover this is brand new equipment and giving hang issue during presentations. So this device is a big pain in the neck during pea business time.This is very crucial time of sale when we are facing trouble..Company has proactively replace all the instruments because of coming season to avoid hardships. But,all in vain because of so many troubles.
As discussed above requesting you to take the prompt action to replace the same very quickly.Further more,installation of the equipments should be on immediate basis.
Expecting a quick reply from your company in order to avoid further escalation.
thanking you
Albert
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ny .I am the self user of the equipments provided by your company. i am asso...
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...ted with this company for last 5 years.This is the first time i am facing big troub...
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... facing big trouble with this equipment.Battery backup of this device is very poor. Thi...
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...han 6 hours as committed in the booklet.Moreover this is brand new equipment and giving ...
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...han 6 hours as committed in the booklet.Moreover this is brand new equipment and giving ...
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... time of sale when we are facing trouble..Company has proactively replace all the ...
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...facing trouble..Company has proactively replace all the instruments because of coming s...
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...of coming season to avoid hardships. But,all in vain because of so many troubles. ...
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... vain because of so many troubles. As discussed above requesting you to take ...
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...action to replace the same very quickly.Further more,installation of the equipments sho...
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...place the same very quickly.Further more,installation of the equipments should be on immediat...
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...ate basis. Expecting a quick reply from your company in order to avoid furt...
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...order to avoid further escalation. thanking you Albert
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, moreover, so, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 908.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10112359551 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21490205965 2.54303337028 126% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623595505618 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.1807401407 44.8134815571 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.888888889 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 2.54639175258 903% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2304869727 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0966408872903 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667890697677 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119293131674 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053738492238 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 8.71597938144 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.