Write a letter to the manager of your local bus services. They have recently made some changes to the bus services which created inconvenience for you. In your letter, explain :
Q) What are the changes?
Q)What are the problems you are facing?
Q) What part of the service would to like to change?
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to bring your attention regarding the changes in the local bus services which created discomfort for the people and request you to make us comfortable.
Introducing myself, I am residing in Porwal street since five years and I have been using your bus services to reach office daily. Recently, I have noticed few service changes, especially the timings of the buses. The buses I have been traveling are regular on time till few days back. However, I have observed that the timings are changed from office hours 9:00 A.M to 9:30 A.M and I could not reach the office in the specified time. Even the number of buses to Kothrud area also reduced. I do not have a bike and even cannot afford.
Hence, relying on your bus services. Also the bus stop has been changed and it is a congested area and people feel difficulty to board the buses. Kindly see that every change made is feasible to public.
Finally, I would suggest you to provide a convenient place with less traffic to board the buses to avoid accidents. Apart from this, kindly increase the number of buses in our area to be feasible to reach the destinations early.
Yours Faithfully
George Thomas
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ed from office hours 9:00 A.M to 9:30 A.M and I could not reach the office in the...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... Hence, relying on your bus services. Also the bus stop has been changed and it is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, hence, however, if, regarding, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1007.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77251184834 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39262810675 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592417061611 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.539253925 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.4615384615 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2307692308 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260179036206 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0857669257723 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0863594405884 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168641529282 0.12726935374 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116839035956 0.0580467560999 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.