Some people think that instead of preventing the climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, climate is deteriorating day by day due to global warming and urbanization which is of great concern. But some people believe that, we should acclimatise to the chainging environment instead of preventing it. This essay aims at discussing the supporting details to my opinion in further paragraphs.
There are various factors which contribute to the pollution of environment and they can be prevented. First of all, rapidly increasing automobiles are the main contributing factor. As a individual we can prevent it by limiting the use of personal vehicles and using public transportation. Government should also encourage people to use public transportation and make public buses more accessible and cheaper to people. Additionally, deforestation is also a leading cause of global warming. So government should frame policies and implement strong laws to prevent the cutting of trees. To cite an example, in countries like America it is mandatory for every city to cover its 33% of area under forestration. Furthermore, if necessary measures to prevent the climate change are not taken, the atmosphere will become hazardous to the human existence.
On the other hand, some people believe to live with changing environment which is think is not a possible way. For example, atmosphere is getting hotter 2 degree Celsius every year and glaciers are melting which result in rise in sea levels. This increase in water level will submerge the island like andaman and nicobar in coming years. So millions of houses will be displaced by flooding, if necessary measures not taken. Above all, will be affected by various diseases like lung cancer because of growing pollution. This will result in death of affected people. Thus to live with changing climate is not possible solution.
In conclusion, having considered all the points elaborated above it can e stated that rapidly changing environment can be prevented by taking necessary steps and living with it is not possible for mankind.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30188679245 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94838615089 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578616352201 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9247986989 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7368421053 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7368421053 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47368421053 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169794836906 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050417208816 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747918643076 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103217362408 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307964741282 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.