For many years fossil fuels have been used in many Industries and also transportation. However new social movements encourage using the other source of energy including wind, solar and electricity. In my opinion new Options are a positive development because of the following reasons.
First of all, the global warming has been increase by usage of traditional energy resources and replacing them with the modern types would cease this concerning issue. For example, a major origin of earth's temperature rising has been known from fuel consumption by cars and hence changing the automobile products to new electronic inventions will erase this source of universe heating.
Secondly, all scientific discoveries prove that carbon mixture are not permanent and they will be finished in twenty years and on the other hand new resources are renewable for ever. So countries should find a novel solution for substituting them and also politicians must legislate useful law to guide people change their lifestyle in order to forget the harmful oil and gasoline goods. For example new generation who are on age of driving should be paid as a reward for buying electronic devices such as bicycle or car and abandoning old machines.
Finally, the fuel produced from fossil is expensive in comparison with the other energies. This means human communities will gain benefit from cost saving. A litre of gasoline is approximately three dollars while solar energy is free for everyone and this could help future of our civilization in an efficient way.
In conclusion, despite of our dependence to fossil fuels human should shift to new sources of energy in a long-term term plan. Societies in accompany with parents should educate their children to embrace green life methodology instead of polluted earth. They could rearrange methods of living in many aspects like transportation, heating, making fire and running devices.
- Fossil fuels are the main source of energy for most countries. However, alternative sources of energy have been encouraged to be used by some countries.To what extent is this a positive or negative development? 89
- TPO-27 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying.Use specific reasons and ex 67
- In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today. 90
- tpo 8.Television advertising directed towards young children (aged two to five) should not be allowed. 90
- TPO-28 - Integrated Writing Task Robert E. Peary was a well-known adventurer and arctic explorer who in 1909 set out to reach the North Pole. When he returned from the expedition, he claimed to have reached the pole on April 7, 1909. This report made him 88
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28852459016 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77934563534 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645901639344 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6057304849 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.214285714 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7857142857 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241095813623 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768197430271 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553172590943 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133512674495 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653484593863 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.