I believe that parents should spend some time to help their children in their school work whenever parents have free time. However, the policy that all parents must volunteer their time in their children’s schools seems flawed because some parents may not have that much amount of time every day that they can help their children in school work. It is also possible that parents may be lacking knowledge of particular subject hence they cannot help their children in their homework problems.
Firstly, the profession of parents is such that they are totally absorbed in their job. Say for example if children’s mother and father are both doctors then they cannot help them with their studies everyday. In such cases one cannot force parents to leave their job to help their children’s schools.
I believe that it is teacher's duty to guide students with their studies such a way that the students are his/her children. The teacher is expert in the subjects in which students have query. So, only teacher's can best be able to help them with their homework. For example a student has doubt in math then the math teacher is the best person to help the child instead of his parents. The parents may not be good at math or the are not connected with school syllabus hence they cannot solve math related problems of their child.
However, it is parent’s duty to spend sufficient amount of time in their children's education. They must attend parent's meeting at school as in the meeting they come to know about their children’s progress and weakness. The teacher will suggest specific guideline to parents so that their children’s performance can be improved.
In a nutshell, the policy that all parents must spend time in their children's education should not be made mandatory. However, parents should spend sufficient amount of time to check their children's progress and guide them morally to improve their performance.
- To serve the housing needs of our students, Buckingham College should build a number of new dormitories. Buckingham's enrollment is growing and, based on current trends, will double over the next 50 years, thus making existing dormitory space inadequate. 50
- Nature's Way, a chain of stores selling health food and other health-related products, is opening its next franchise in the town of Plainsville. The store should prove to be very successful: Nature's Way franchises tend to be most profitable in areas wher 55
- Governments should focus on solving the immediate problems of today rather than on trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future. 50
- All parents should be required to volunteer time to their children's schools. 50
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, so, then, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.4196629213 137% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1624.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 323.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02786377709 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61040837821 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 215.323595506 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.442724458204 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 464.4 704.065955056 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.59117977528 88% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.99550561798 120% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1632042794 60.3974514979 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.5 118.986275619 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1875 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.21951772744 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 7.80617977528 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.485933504212 0.243740707755 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.195814085431 0.0831039109588 236% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124754425927 0.0758088955206 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.316309002539 0.150359130593 210% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122904063629 0.0667264976115 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 14.1392134831 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 48.8420337079 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.38706741573 84% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 100.480337079 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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