The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of Australian who exercising regularly divided by gender and in six age groups in 2010.
Overall, men did scheduled sports in less than women in all groups except juniors from 15 to 24 which was more than females.
The first group in 15 to 24 which male’s percent stood at 52.8 percent while females by 5 percent did fewer activities. this trend changes for the rest of the groups where women surpassed and about half of 25 to 34 years were did an everyday workout, while men witnessed a 10 percent reduction in comparison with the previous group.
The overall trend of sport-girls increased to 53.3 percent for 45 to 54 years and then dropped for the next two groups. 65 years and elders have the least participation among females by 47.1 percent which was approximately equal to males. The trend of males in completely vice versa of women reduced to 39.5 percent in 35 to 44 years old group and then rose. In this trend, they never reached the women participation percentage.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'schedule'
Suggestion: schedule
...e groups in 2010. Overall, men did scheduled sports in less than women in all groups...
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Line 9, column 126, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...ales by 5 percent did fewer activities. this trend changes for the rest of the group...
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Line 9, column 232, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'done'.
Suggestion: done
...d and about half of 25 to 34 years were did an everyday workout, while men witnesse...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 860.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80446927374 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.637617071 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614525139665 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7693401491 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.5 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206497655909 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0947922534755 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106889765306 0.0843802449381 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1573575644 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117288377253 0.0819641961636 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.