Hosting sporting events such as the Olympics and the World Cup can bring benefits to the host countries. How far do you agree with this statement? Use your own examples to support.
The topic of hosting sporting events such as the Olympics and the World Cup can bring benefits to the host countries has become a heated debate among authorities. Although many people assert that these events will bring troubles in the country, the others refute this proposition saying that these events will promote their country. This essay will discuss the benefits of sporting events for the country and reach a logical conclusion.
There are myriad of arguments which find out why sporting activities like the World Cup and Olympics are a precursor for prosperity in which the most preponderant one is that it will help boost the country's economy. Hosting these events would bring business to the country by attracting many investors. For example, a study showed that if under-developed countries take part in hosting such events, this will skyrocket their economy by promoting local products. Thus, hosting a sporting event will play a key role in increasing the country's economy.
Another pivotal aspect of the reason would be that these venues will also promote local culture and more and more tourists will come to the country. These events also promote a good reputation of the country among other countries which will also fortify local people. For instance, a survey revealed that an under-developed country, Pakistan has boosted its GDP by 4% in the previous year by making a good gesture among developed countries. Hence, sporting events are also important in promoting traditional cultures.
In conclusion, this essay discussed the benefits of promoting sporting events for the country in terms of enhancing the economy and excel in tourism. Therefore, in my opinion, governments of poor countries should take solid steps to help promote such trends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 6.10837438424 213% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1498.0 1207.87684729 124% => OK
No of words: 284.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27464788732 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65327590745 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 139.433497537 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510563380282 0.580463131201 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 452.7 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9757322834 50.4703680194 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.230769231 104.977214359 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.9669160288 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.25397266985 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216635030429 0.242375264174 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100872292578 0.0925447433944 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0956881643485 0.071462118173 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153851918929 0.151781067708 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0972812697027 0.0609392437508 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 12.6369458128 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 11.5310837438 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 55.0591133005 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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