Some people believe that education success is based on good teachers and others believe that it depends on students attitude. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
Education plays an imperative role in shaping our nation. The successfulness of the studies depends on the teachers who taught the subjects, can also others think it’s on students’ attitude. Building up the country is dependent on teachers or students' hand, this essay will discuss both the opportunities and derive a logical conclusion at the end of the discussion.
On the one hand, many believe that the teachers are a true inspiration for successful students. The success of many students depends on the teachers who motivate them and shows the right path by properly guiding them. There are says that teachers are a guru and they are more important even than parents. A good teacher not only teaches the subjects but also empower the value of life and ethics. For instance, Dr.Abdul Kalam, a former president of India, explained on many occasions that one of his college professors inspired him to become a scientist on space research. Consequently, the victory of many legends has nurtured by outstanding teachers.
On the other hand, the students bring up in their life as a successful personality based on their thought process, according to someone. It may be true that schooling provides them all the opportunities for the students to learn and equip whatever they want and fulfill their dreams. A good attitude is one which is very essential to utilize all the facilities in the school or college, for example, library, sport and computer laboratory, to study themselves and become a notable knowledgeable person. Hence, other than one who teaches the subjects in the class, the candidate’s attitude is vital to achieving the goal in the studies.
In conclusion, I strongly opine that the prosperity of education relies on the teachers, other than that thought process of the students is also contributes some weight to become a successful person. However, the support of teachers and their mentoring makes the students more successful than one’s attitude alone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 93, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...tion. The successfulness of the studies is depending on the teachers who taught the subjects...
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Line 3, column 415, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Abdul
...ue of life and ethics. For instance, Dr.Abdul Kalam, a former president of India, exp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, may, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18827160494 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93323564704 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549382716049 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 517.5 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6728353949 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.066666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53333333333 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259478820441 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0812361760922 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611366750379 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157107693863 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520261452627 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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